58 – A Turning Point in Mafia Vengeance by KATHLEEN HAYAT
In this chapter of Mafia Vengeance, KATHLEEN HAYAT introduces major changes to the story. 58 shifts the narrative tone, revealing secrets, advancing character arcs, and increasing stakes within the Fanfiction genre.
She was yanked back on her feet by John who dragged her in front of Andrew, who was looking at her father, who was on the floor hissing in pain.
"I thought to kill her in front of you but now I've changed my mind. I'll keep her forever after killing you."
Andrew didn't say anything, instead he was looking at Shawn. John moved back dragging Chloe along with him. He made her stand in front of Andrew and forcefully make her hold the gun while pointing it towards Andrew's head.
John hissed. "Shoot him.
Chloe looked at Andrew with wide teary eyes. She was mortified. She didn't want to kill him. He was her husband. Andrew on the other hand was calm and composed. He was calculating John's every move.
When she felt John loosening his grip on her for a bit she abruptly turned around and held the gun on John. Who, started chuckling on her act.
"Do I look stupid enough to give you a loaded gun."
On instance Chloe pulled the trigger but nothing happened it was empty, he gave her a deadly smirk before taking out another gun from his waistband. He spoke.
"Now watch!"
With that a shot was heard like a booming roar. A scream left her mouth.
With that a shot was heard like a booming roar. A scream left her mouth.
She closed her eyes in complete fear. No she can't lose him. But when she opened her eyes. Her world came crumbling down.
John shot Andrew but the one who received the bullet was non other than her father. Her father came in front of Andrew to protect him from the shot and got it himself.
The bullet pierced her father's chest. A blood curling scream left Chloe's throat. She ran towards her father in hysteria. She put his head on her lap and started crying hysterically.
"P-please God! Save my D-Dad."
Andrew was looking at her father numbly. Why? Why was the only question swarming in his head. Why he saved him.
Why?
Her father looked at Andrew and mouthed. "I'm sorry" to him before taking his last breath. Her father with trembling hands tried to wipe away her tears and in the process before he could wipe the tear from her cheeks his hand fell down, and he died.
She screamed so agonizingly painfully. Her body was wrecking with sobs.
John mused. "How sad! Now cut your drama already. Your husband is still left to be shot-"
He was cut in the middle by the blood curling scream of Chloe. She was screaming painfully while holding her stomach.
"AHHHH!!!!"
She felt cramps in her pelvis and a sharp pain in her stomach. She held her stomach while her water broke out. A scream erupted her throat.
"AHHH! It hurts!!!"
"CHLOE !!!"
Andrew felt like his world would stop. Seeing Chloe laying on the floor while holding her stomach was horrific for him.
He can't lose his family. No he can't lose her. He was feeling like dying. After, so many years he was scared out of his wits. He can't lose her!
Jess was horrified looking at Chloe's condition as she spoke up. "She's gone into premature labor due to all the stress. She needs to go to the hospital. Please!"
Jess cried. "NO!!!!CHLOE!"
Andrew turned around only to face Chloe's back. When, he saw her frail body falling backwards he instantly held her in his arms.
The sight of blood oozing out of her shoulder with bullet lodged in it made him numb. She took his bullet! She saved him!
At that moment he felt like someone is drilling a hole in his heart. He felt like he couldn't breathe anymore. As, if his life was slipping out of his hand.
Andrew screamed. "NO! NO! PLEASE NO!"
Chloe felt an excruciating pain in her shoulder and her contractions weren't helping either. Her consciousness was loosing slightly.
She felt devastating, she won't be able to see her child. She won't be able to get her happily ever after. She won't be able to live her dreams.
But she was content for one thing that she saved her love. Yes she loved him, and she isn't going to deny it anymore.
Chloe hold Andrew's cheek with her bloody hand and smiled softly at him.
Chloe mustered up. "I-I forgive you!"
Her body went stiff when she felt another contraction hit her. With labored breathing she spoke.
"I-I love y-you Andrew!"
With that her hand fell beside her, and she closed her eyes.
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