Grammar is terrible. Needs a lot of editing. Chapters are very short and can be repetitive from the other persons point of view. Frustrating as the plot wasn’t developed during these chapters. Not worth the money unlocking.
---
first thank to author for the wonderful story..you share to us and I'm loving it I don't know how many times I read it..your amazing dear you have a good imagination
---
loved the story but am going to stop cause both the main characters just won't get back together it's either the female not wanting to get back together or the male character it would be really good if they just put all the past away and get back together and have a future together
---
The Shark Mafia Boss book started out really strong and was a different type of story for me to get into. However I felt like it was really drawn out and could have ended well before it did. Some of the main male characters were no longer appealing and became super toxic and it got hard to read. Has good steam init
Comments
The readers' comments on the novel: The Shark Mafia Boss