Rejected By My Mate

read Rejected By My Mate (Lorraine Scarr) novel review:

hey I like Rejected By My Mate novel .a different story with so many twists no problem with lang or grammar a fantastic way of story telling n cost can b ignored as chapters are lengthy so everything goes wonderful what hurts is no response from author.please work on it dear two lines after a chapter can b done.

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Rejected By My Mate novel  would be great if it wasn’t so poorly written.Things repeat very often throughout the whole book. It has a lot of looped action, not much romance it that’s what you’re looking for and grammar is off some. You will read the same description of a character many times and things blur together

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I feel like it jumps around too much and the chapter's aren't long enough I have put in alot of money to get to where I am in the book but it could be a great book

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It lacks the cohesiveness needed to be one of those books that have you accidentally seeing the sun rise. As I am already invested in this story I will complete it. It will be the last thing I read on this platform. I can purchase whole proofread books elsewhere for less than a few chapters here